The Mistake Vk Elle Kennedy Updated

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The Mistake Vk Elle Kennedy Updated

Logan is a controversial hero. Some readers think he is a walking red flag (he sleeps around, he ignores Grace). Others think he is a wounded green flag (he grows up, he grovels beautifully). The updated version supposedly adds 15+ pages of "groveling" (the apology and chase sequence), which has made fans of the "grovel trope" desperate to get their hands on it.

If you find a VK post with "The Mistake updated," it will typically contain:

First, a quick history lesson. The Mistake was originally published in 2015. It was classic Elle Kennedy: steamy, emotional, and filled with the signature banter of the Briar University hockey team.

In 2023, Elle Kennedy announced that she was revisiting her backlist titles to address "evolving standards in romance." Specifically, she wanted to remove dub-con (dubious consent) elements that were common in early 2010s New Adult novels but feel problematic to many readers today.

That depends on your perspective.

If you are a longtime fan: You might miss the raw, messy edge of the original. The 2015 The Mistake felt very "college"—full of bad decisions and blurred lines. The updated version feels safer, but some argue it loses a bit of the realistic chaos of freshman year.

If you are a new reader (2024+): You will likely prefer the updated version. It ages significantly better. Logan goes from "that guy who took advantage of a drunk girl" (a major ick) to "a guy who made a relationship mistake by prioritizing hockey over feelings." The latter makes him much more redeemable.

Abstract This paper examines "The Mistake" by VK Elle Kennedy, exploring its narrative structure, themes, character development, and cultural reception. It situates the work within contemporary romance/new-adult fiction, analyzes craft choices (plot, pacing, voice, dialogue), assesses reader response and controversies, and offers actionable guidance for writers, editors, and marketers seeking to learn from or adapt similar material.

Keywords: Elle Kennedy, The Mistake, contemporary romance, narrative analysis, craft, publishing, reader reception the mistake vk elle kennedy updated

9.2 Character Development

9.3 Handling Sensitive Material

9.4 Dialogue & Scene Craft

9.5 Revision & Editing

Appendix A — Checklist for Authors (Quick-reference)

Appendix B — Editorial Flagging Guide

References (Select theoretical and craft references common in fiction-writing analysis; specific citations omitted here but should include contemporary-romance market reports, narrative craft texts, and sensitivity-guideline resources.)

If you want, I can convert this into a formatted manuscript with expanded scene-level examples, sample revision notes for specific passages, or a marketing rollout plan tailored to a launch—tell me which. Logan is a controversial hero

On the surface, updating a background detail seems minor. But for readers who’ve devoured both the Off-Campus and Briar U series, this is huge.

Here’s why:
Erwan Le Lann

Skipper, mountain guide and co-leader of the expedition
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Marion Courtois

President of the Maewan association and co-leader of the expedition
Naturopath, after a degree in psychology and a master in public health, she decides to enter an engaging profession: the management of humanitarian programs for NGOs operating in Central America, in the Sahara, in the Middle East. During her 12 years in the field, she progressively enriched her skills in crisis management, geopolitical analysis and advocacy.

She joins Maewan’s deck inspired by the thought of participating in the creation of a future respectful of the planet and its inhabitants. After carrying out an assessment and working on Maewan’s mission and strategy, she becomes president of the association. A challenge to the height of her talent and her flawless ethics.
- Distinguishing featurecan answer her e-mails while steering
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Erwan Le Lann

Skipper, mountain guide and co-leader of the expedition
Part of the French junior ski team, then ice climbing team as a senior. Mountain guide and skipper, Erwan has crossed the world wearing crampons and ice-axes, with more than 20 expeditions behind his back. He has been organising international climbing events –the “Petzl Roc Trip” in Europe, USA, Mexico, China and Argentina for 12 years before throwing himself into this 7-year adventure between sea and mountains, with top-level athletes as teammates.

With Marion, they have decided to use this sport adventure as basis on which to develop Maewan’s educational and environmental programs. In this context, Erwan was chosen in 2017 as Activist Of The Year by Communicaton Sans Frontières during the Fair Communication Awards.
- Distinguishing featurehas more yerba mate than hemoglobine in his blood
- Activist of the Year Award 2017 🏆
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Media

Bastien Laure

Producer/Cameraman
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Marie Cortial

Photographer/Journalist
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Sam BIÉ

Photographer/Cameraman
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Jeremy Bernard

Photographer
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Guillaume Broust

PRODUCER
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Monica Dalmasso

PHOTOGRAPHER
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Bertrand Delapierre

DIRECTOR, CAMERAMAN
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Yann Hovine

JOURNALIST
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Jimmy Martinello

Photographer
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Patricia Oudit

Journalist
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Guillaume Vallot

PHOTOGRAPHER/JOURNALIST
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Bastien Laure

Producer/Cameraman
Discovered in Lost in the Swell, I contacted Erwan and we drank a beer at the Carroz d’Arraches. When he stepped in the bar in flip-flop I knew that I came to the right place.

This night I saw one of their films… And I wasn’t sure that I cam to the right place anymore when I heard Xavier De Le Rue saying that in the boat, the temperature wasn’t higher than 5°… But whatever , this need to confront ourself to the environment and the will to raise awareness among peoples through committed documentaries makes you easily forget all of these details. And French Brittany doesn’t seems as much worst as the Greenland it isn’t ?
- Distinguishing featureAlmost one year of travelling Latin America with only 2000€ and a backpack, trading vidéos in order to get a hotel room or getting some scuba-diving lessons, almost feels normal. With Maewan, I'm tradin a vidéo in order to get a life experience, and we will see what the future holds ! :)
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Marie Cortial

Photographer/Journalist
Between see and mountain I can’t choose between them… Passionate by these milieux, I remotely followed Maewan’s adventures until the day I met Marion and Erwan during an event.

I was very touched by their project, their commitement, their values, and their bravery !

So, I try my best in order to make my contribution to bring their actions and their commitement to light in my reports in order to raise awareness among a larger amount of people.
- Distinguishing featureI love telling beautiful stories with my pictures, get the magical moments and try to always "see the handsome"...
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Sam BIÉ

Photographer/Cameraman
- Instagram
Ah ! Finally ! It’s been 7 years I’ve been waiting to have seasisckness ! And that’s done with the French Brittany-Ireland travel. Finally a trip with Erwan with whom we did some RocTrip together when he was a member of Petzl.
I’m really glad I came aboard Maewan, this brand new mythical boat. Mythical because of its background, its sturdiness, its famous guests, and above all of that, its mythical kind, friendly, welcoming and generous crew ! A true family for sure ! Erwan, Marion and now Hoël, the best little pirate.
During this trip, climbing the astonishing Inis Mór, one the Aran Islands in Ireland, obviously makes me want to sail again with them to discover new cliffs and spend great time with the Wawan Family in their future travels during this crazy project !
- Distinguishing featureBehind the techniques, a truth that you must find on your own is hiding, search...
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Jeremy Bernard

Photographer
Maewan, a boat and its captain, Erwan. Maewan, an acquaintance and a companion. Maewan welcomed me in their adventure in the autumn of 2016, in the Bering Sea. Since then, Maewan has become part of my daily vocabulary. An extraordinary adventure with no boundaries, with fair human values, Maewan is one of the encounters that have marked my life’s evolution. Being on board Maewan is a true honour. An inextensible cocoon where sweat rhymes with warmth. Sharing with mooring.

Kite surfing, highline, climbing, sailing. Alaska, Shishmaref, Nome, Bering Sea, French Polynesia, The Marquesas Islands, Tahiti, Makatea, Rapa, Pitcairn Islands, Easter Island. The list is long and the memories even longer. The only downside of the story is that I still haven’t managed to get my hands on the stash of Chartreuse and Nutella.
- Distinguishing featureSeaman at hand
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Guillaume Broust

PRODUCER
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I got to know Erwan when I worked for Petzl (2001 to 2017). With Laurent Lafouche, we formed a “magic ” trio to bring out the best in communication and events: not only films, but alsoadvertisement, websites, and events, including the famous PetzlRocTrips. We have worked together for 10 years, always with great energy and creativity. I left the Petzl company shortly after Erwan, and it was a pleasure to be able to join the Maewan association, which represents my values for the environment, education, and sport.
- Distinguishing featureStory Organiser. Guillaume manages to gather a team (cameramen, photographers, actors, musicians...) to create stories to watch, live and listen to. With more than 20 years of experience in the field of image, film and web, Guillaume brings his creative touch to many of Maewan's projects, such as those in Greenland and Polynesia.
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Monica Dalmasso

PHOTOGRAPHER
- Website
Stef and I set off to join Erwan as he arrived in the Solomon Islands after a month of sailing solo. Neither Stef nor I were sailors, it was a bit hectic, and very soon we were unable to leave the deck. We waited wisely for Erwan to come and bring us some food, it was impossible to go down into the hold, a great lesson in humility! We still survived and shared a magical week in the village of Utupua, sailed in Vanuatu, a great life experience aboard Maewan.
- Distinguishing featurealways hungry during a trip, must always have some nuts in her pockets, or she gets very grumpy. Fan of wildlife and nature, likes to capture images of extreme sports, the power of the elements, the links between human and nature.
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Bertrand Delapierre

DIRECTOR, CAMERAMAN
- Website
Greenland, Kuriles, New Zealand, French Polynesia, to think I was afraid of “Jaws” as a child, but now I’m much better. However I can no longer drink Vodka since “Maewan aux Kuriles” (fortunately Chartreuse is one of the boat’s sponsors). Over the years Maewan has become a bit of a second home to me. My favourite sleeper is the one close to the engine, it reminds me (from a distance…) of my cat’s purr.

I’m proud to have launched the double-cabestantrend, to eradicate the epidemic of drifting(dingy or zodiac) and to be allowed to charge its batteries on board (even though it was after the captain).
- Distinguishing featureA hyper-active soul, Béber is often the one who makes the traces, sees through the round trip ,to get the best shots of the athletes who embark Maewan, and that's something! Curious (too much?), jack-of-all-trades (too much?), in any case impossible to sleep in, and therefore finds it difficult to stay up until 6am during a night out, however he is capable of emptying apacket freeze-dried fruit in a few seconds. Marion and Erwan have found the solution: special lunchboxes for Béber when he is on board.
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Yann Hovine

JOURNALIST
TF1 journalist since 2004, in charge of mostly committed articles: nature, adventure, interesting stories, sport, tourism… Erwan and I met during Maewan’s first break in polar regions. We were in the East of Iceland to share life on the boat and film some wonderful moments, including a fabulous climb on an ice fall in a remote fjord during nightfall.

One of our most beautiful reports which won us the award for the best report according to sports journalists of the year 2016. Forever engraved…
- Distinguishing featureCapable of perceiving in every detail the beginning of a magnificent story.
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Jimmy Martinello

Photographer
- Website
It was a truly incredible experience. I am forever grateful, to have been given the opportunity to work within this incredible community through the Makatea project put into place by Maewan. They managed to bring together an amazing team of 15 professionals from all over the world, who all share the same passion.

World class atheletes, photographers, film producers, journalists, educators, and the magic did its thing. Without a doubt one of the best and most productive trips I have ever done. An faultless organisation, whether it was transport, accommodation, food, but also the daily organisation of work for everyone.

My favourite memory is everybody’s joint effort towards a common goal: Makatea’s inhabitants, TheMaewan crew, the Acropol society, and the French Polynesian tourists during the inauguration event. We all felt connected, whether it was at the campsite, during the sports discovery events, or during the evening meals. It was one of the best experiences of all time, and I hope to be able to join them again sometime! I miss you all!

Great vibes your way…

Vous me manquez tous! Great vibes your way……
- Distinguishing featureWith his home in Squamish (British Colombia), Jimmy is equally a photographer, adventurer, athlete and father. “With the development of new technologies and the media, everything grows so fast. We can sometimes feel lost and forget what is really important. It is essential to believe in what we do, to take time to root ourselves and to be present to construct a world animated by passion and preservation of our environment.
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Patricia Oudit

Journalist
- Website
16 years ago, I met Erwan at the foot of the Champagny-En-Vanoise ice fall. Six months later, we got to know each other better on a chalk cliff in Dover, slightly, where, in the presence of Sam Beaugey, he was testing dry-tooling for a report in the magazine Equipe. At the time, he already had the desire to go to sea… During the Roc Trips he organized for Petzl, including the memorable Chinese edition that earned him the nickname of xiexie (pronounced cheeky) Wawan, I learned to understand his phlegmatic humour that hides an incredible energy and ability to bring people together.

His projects are crazy. He probably is a little crazy. Still, I followed him to Alaska for an unforgettable crossing of the Bering Strait in 2016, then back to the Marquesas two years later. The third time at Makatea in June 2019 for this wonderful project to bring theisland back to life through rock climbing.The Makatea episode sums up “MaErwan”, which has become an extension of his sailboat: adventure at the end of the world, rock, water, solidarity and a great sense of commitment.
- Distinguishing featureCompulsive writer. Never leaves her small spiral notebook and ballpoint pen to ask millions of questions to anyone in her field of vision. Repeats often, not because she's deaf (that's for later), but to make sure she doesn't write nonsense. If there's an easy cliff lying around, she won't say no. If there's a valley that's not too steep for skiing or snowboarding, she always joins in. She can get on any boat, because she never throws up. That's good, because apart from cooking and eating, she doesn't know how to do much else on the water.
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Guillaume Vallot

PHOTOGRAPHER/JOURNALIST
As an old friend of Erwan’s I was involved in the early stages of this project both in a literal and more figurative sense. The departure from Britanny and the extreme winter sailing into Iceland and Greenland were a solid beginning where my skills as an amateur sailor were put to the test! Since then I have followed with passion but from a distance, in the warmth of my sofa in the Alps, Maewan’s extraordinary adventures, the evolution of the project into an association. Today, it is with great joy and a emotion that I join the captain and his crew in the warm and isolated waters of Polynesia.
- Distinguishing featureAlways searching for the best deals, goodaccommodation, the most comfortable means of transport, the best local food…His investigative skills allow him to teach you the ancestral techniques of fishing, gathering and cooking, in just a few days, as if he had been doing it since he was a child.An opportunistic hunter and omnivore, he is more or less happy to try and hunt for dog-toothed tuna or coconuts crabs.
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Logan is a controversial hero. Some readers think he is a walking red flag (he sleeps around, he ignores Grace). Others think he is a wounded green flag (he grows up, he grovels beautifully). The updated version supposedly adds 15+ pages of "groveling" (the apology and chase sequence), which has made fans of the "grovel trope" desperate to get their hands on it.

If you find a VK post with "The Mistake updated," it will typically contain:

First, a quick history lesson. The Mistake was originally published in 2015. It was classic Elle Kennedy: steamy, emotional, and filled with the signature banter of the Briar University hockey team.

In 2023, Elle Kennedy announced that she was revisiting her backlist titles to address "evolving standards in romance." Specifically, she wanted to remove dub-con (dubious consent) elements that were common in early 2010s New Adult novels but feel problematic to many readers today.

That depends on your perspective.

If you are a longtime fan: You might miss the raw, messy edge of the original. The 2015 The Mistake felt very "college"—full of bad decisions and blurred lines. The updated version feels safer, but some argue it loses a bit of the realistic chaos of freshman year.

If you are a new reader (2024+): You will likely prefer the updated version. It ages significantly better. Logan goes from "that guy who took advantage of a drunk girl" (a major ick) to "a guy who made a relationship mistake by prioritizing hockey over feelings." The latter makes him much more redeemable.

Abstract This paper examines "The Mistake" by VK Elle Kennedy, exploring its narrative structure, themes, character development, and cultural reception. It situates the work within contemporary romance/new-adult fiction, analyzes craft choices (plot, pacing, voice, dialogue), assesses reader response and controversies, and offers actionable guidance for writers, editors, and marketers seeking to learn from or adapt similar material.

Keywords: Elle Kennedy, The Mistake, contemporary romance, narrative analysis, craft, publishing, reader reception

9.2 Character Development

9.3 Handling Sensitive Material

9.4 Dialogue & Scene Craft

9.5 Revision & Editing

Appendix A — Checklist for Authors (Quick-reference)

Appendix B — Editorial Flagging Guide

References (Select theoretical and craft references common in fiction-writing analysis; specific citations omitted here but should include contemporary-romance market reports, narrative craft texts, and sensitivity-guideline resources.)

If you want, I can convert this into a formatted manuscript with expanded scene-level examples, sample revision notes for specific passages, or a marketing rollout plan tailored to a launch—tell me which.

On the surface, updating a background detail seems minor. But for readers who’ve devoured both the Off-Campus and Briar U series, this is huge.

Here’s why:

On land

Alexandre Vellut

Digital responsible
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Héloïse Le Pendu

Sustainable development project officer
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Tess Denise

Brittany base's head
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Quentin Dehay

île-de-france base's head
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Léo Carvalho

Educational Facilitator
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Matthieu Klitting

MULTIMEDIA PRODUCTION MANAGER
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Jérôme Niard

LOGISTICIAN
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Alexandre Vellut

Digital responsible
After completed the first year of his Information-Communication Licence at Savoie Mont Blanc University, Alexandre started his second year and he joined Maewan as an intern for the digital responsible post. Coming from the Haute-Savoie Region, being aware of the environnemental and animal cause and spending a lot of time on the internet, he will do his best in order to allow a good digital communication for the association.
- Distinguishing featureUnconditional nougat eater, he loves cats even if he is allergic to these cute fuzzy little things.
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Héloïse Le Pendu

Sustainable development project officer
Originally from Brittany and passionate about English and Italian, Héloïse moved to Grenoble for her bachelor’s and master’s degrees in applied foreign languages. It was there that she discovered the joys of living in the mountains, hiking and enjoying breathtaking landscapes! Sporty, curious about everything and sensitive to the world around her, she then decided to get involved in the protection of nature. This is how she joined Maewan as a sustainable development project officer, to contribute to the association’s environmental awareness and education work and bring back hope.
- Distinguishing featureShe takes her lunch break very seriously, always cooks good food and takes a nap on her deckchair when the sun is shining !
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Tess Denise

Brittany base's head
Very concerned about the marine environment and its protection, Tess study marine ecology and coastal management in Brest for 5 years now. It is within this framework that she became aware of the impact of man on ecosystems and developed the desire to commit herself professionally to a more environmentally friendly future. Also concerned by a will of sharing and transmitting, she cofounded 3 years ago, beside her study, Kan Avel : an association with a environnemental, social, and solidary project around nautic sports. Tess gets onboard of our team to enhance Maewan’s Brittany base and to share her value and engagement to every sailors (young or not) of this beautiful place.
- Distinguishing featureCan sleep almost everywhere and in every circumstances, but can also stay awake all night if you need an ear to talk.
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Quentin Dehay

île-de-france base's head
After spending two months in Les Carroz as an educational coordinator, Quentin is continuing to work with Maewan and has started his mission as Head of their base in the Paris Region (Île-de-France), as part of his degree at the IEP in Paris. As a sports enthusiast and beeing deeply concerned by the environmental cause, to the point that he’s founded an NGO: Treevelers, he intends to help Maewan raise awareness about sustainable development topics with the young generation. A journalist at heart, he wishes more than anything to inform youth about the reality of our world, with one objective: understanding so that we can take better action and help prevent for the future.
- Distinguishing feature :Wise mistakes hunter, but fervent Haute-Savoie's bouquetins and chamois defender (there are a many of them at the Carroz !).
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Léo Carvalho

Educational Facilitator
Actuellement en dernière année de Bac +3 Gestion et Protection de la Nature, Léo décide de mener son service civique cher Maewan, une association pleine de valeurs et de bienveillance. C’est durant ces 3 années d’étude dans l’environnement qu’il s’est rendu compte de l’immense impact négatif de l’homme sur les écosystème quels qu’ils soient. C’est là que lui a été donné l’envie de s’investir dans l’animation et la sensibilisation à la nature qui lui semblait donc être la meilleur chose à faire pour, à son échelle, donner l’envie d’aimer et de protéger cette nature qui nous fait vivre, car les jeunes générations sont celles qui protègeront notre terre de demain. Pour lui, c’est un plaisir de travailler sur des supports pédagogiques destinés à la sensibilisation des plus jeunes sur l’environnement et le savoir vivre / être. C’est avec confiance que je Léo se lance dans cette aventure de 8 mois.

Currently in last year of Bac +3 Nature’s Protection and Gestion, Léo decided to do its civic service chez Maewan, a very valuable and full
- Distinguishing featureHe likes the rain as he likes the sun.
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Matthieu Klitting

MULTIMEDIA PRODUCTION MANAGER
In search of human, sporting, and environmental adventures, his encounter with Maewanwas evident. As a former consultant who has now diverted back to his initial passion, audio-visual production, he offers Maewan a different perspective of multimedia production. It is with curiosity and enthusiasm that he takes up his mission at Maewan, sharing the highlights of the adventure with as many people as possible.
- Distinguishing featureQuestions and approaches each adventure with curiosity in order to transmit his discoveries more effectively.
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Jérôme Niard

LOGISTICIAN
Jerome knows how transform any ingredient into pure delights. He is a great cook, aswell as a welder, installs solar panels and has built himself a self-contained cabin in the woods. He has been at the heart of the preparation of the sailing boat since the beginning of the adventure at the Aber Wrac’h. As the association’s logistician, he prepares the crews’ files, keeps track of the inventory, ensures the follow-up of the equipment and material, reports on the risks of encounters with the boat, deals with the authorizations, without him the adventure would be too difficult!
- Distinguishing featureGyro Gearloose
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